Ask
any editor what he or she is looking for in a new writer and, nine times
out of ten, the answer will
be 'a fresh voice.' Then ask those same editors to define voice and their
answers will be variations of "I
can't put it into words, but I'll know it when I see it."
Webster's
defines voice as 'distinction of form.' Voice is what makes your writing
distinct from any other author's. It's the unique way you put words on
paper. Some voice are more distinctive than others. See if you can match
the following examples to their authors.
Gertrude
Barkley stepped out of the Dooley Shaving Parlor and Tonsorial Surgery
at the corner of Main Street and B Avenue. The several wide‑eyed
males loitering in the doorway gave the locally infamous spinster a wide
berth. She smiled at the fellows, almost ruefully.
"Good
morning, gentlemen."
Her
greeting met with mumbled response from the few who had not been struck
mute by the sight before them. The rest continued to stare with as much
astonishment and awe as when the circus elephant had been paraded down
Main Street last spring.
Gertrude
knew, without their shocked expressions, that she had done it again. The
quiet town of Venice, Missouri, was fated for another uproar. And once
again she was the cause. Pamela Morsi,
SOMETHING SHADY.
The
wind blew fitfully out of the east, as the carrier let Jeannette down,
hot, tired, and dusty, in front of the house, instead of at the rear as
he should have. But it was the large, bedraggled mourning wreath, like
a tear on the gray, ragstone face of the Elizabethan manor house, that
drew Miss Saincoeur to the wrong door. That, and habit. She was not yet
used to thinking of front doors as a piece of her past.
The
wreath beckoned in the bright sunlight, a mute expression of a grief so
deep it had been left hanging for all who passed to see. The black silk
ribbons were wind‑tattered and gray with dust, the paper flowers
tired, the dingy paper gloves upon which had once been written the name
and age of the deceased, faded into illegibility. This evidence of a grief,
not yet dimmed enough to see clear to removing such an eyesore, touched
upon a tender place deep within Jeannette's heart, a tender place that
still made her wince on occasion. Here was kinship with the man who was
to be her master, before even they were met. Here, in the wilds of Kent,
of all places, for the first time since crossing the Channel, was a connection
with home ‑‑ the thin thread of grief. Elisabeth Fairchild,
LORD ENDICOTT'S APETITE.
Louisa
Brannigan looked up at her ceiling and tried to control the anger that
was bubbling inside her. It was four‑ thirty in the morning and
the idiot upstairs had just gotten another call. He got them all night
long. Not that she cared, but her bedside portable phone picked up his
signal. The phone rang a second time, sending her flying from the
bed in a rage. "That's it!" she shouted. "I can't
take it anymore. I need my sleep. I need quiet. I need..." She stood
with hands and teeth clenched, eyes narrowed, nose wrinkled, but she couldn't
think what else she needed, so she snatched the phone from her night table,
marched into the bathroom, threw the phone into the toilet, and closed
the lid. Almost at once, peace descended on her. "Much better,"
she said. Janet Evanovich,
NAUGHTY NEIGHBOR.
Each
of the above authors has a very distinctive voice. Their words choices,
sentence structures, settings and characters are all hallmarks
of their particular voices. Pamela Morsi's character thinks
of the staring men outside the barbershop as fellows, while Janet Evanovich's
heroine thinks of her neighbor as idiot. Elisabeth Fairchild uses
long compound sentences that give an almost lyrical quality to her prose
while Janet Evanovich writes short, snappy sentences. Both Pamela
Morsi and Elisabeth Fairchild introduce the reader to women who are breaking
the rules ‑‑ Pam's character has just cut off her long hair
and Elisabeth's character is a servant knocking at the front door
of the house where she seeks employment. But each woman is very different
from the other: Pamela's character accepts
her role as a rebel with quiet good humor, while Elisabeth's servant
responds with gentle resignation to her fate. These choices, most likely
unconscious ones made by the writers,
make up the voice of each author.
How
do you find your own fresh voice that will have editors and readers clamoring
for your work? Here are some things you may find helpful.
Turn
off the internal editor. Find a way to shut up the devil who sits on your
shoulder and whispers in your ear that you're doing it all wrong.
Forget about what's right or proper. Don't worry about spelling and grammar
at this stage of the game. Uncovering your voice is like digging
for treasure ‑‑ you can't afford to be worried about a little
dirt as you wield your shovel. Take a look at some of your informal
writing. Reread old letters or email posts that you have written. Email
is especially useful, since we tend to approach it more like conversation.
Have you ever had an email friend whose
posts you always recognized, even before seeing their signature
line? You recognized that person's voice. Reading your own email may
reveal your voice to you.
Keep
a journal. Journaling is an excellent way to develop your voice. Knowing
we are the only ones who will ever read the words on a journal page, we
can feel free to experiment. Write letters to yourself in your journal.
Experiment with free‑ writing ‑‑ putting down whatever
comes into your head. Without the constraints of rigid form or worries
about what others will think, your voice
may sing out loud and clear.
Experiment
with different styles. My own voice comes through most when I'm writing
humor. Maybe it's because I relax more, or because I feel freer
to experiment. I never would have discovered this if I hadn't tried to
write a humorous novel. Different kinds of writing may reveal different
aspects of your own voice. Try comedy, mystery, and angst‑filled
drama in both historical and contemporary
settings.
Write
in first person. I wrote and sold confession stories for many years and
I believe this writing honed my voice more than anything else.
First person writing forces you to become the character. Like letters,
email and journaling, first person prose has a certain informality that
can lure your true voice out of hiding.
Speak
your words into a tape recorder. Reading your work aloud and playing
it back on a tape recorder can help you
spot certain speech patterns, sentence structures and rhythms that identify
your voice. Do you write lots of short, snappy sentences, or long,
languid phrases? Both of these are attributes
of certain voices.
Rewrite
favorite passages in your own words. A useful exercise for developing
your voice is to select a passage from a favorite author and rewrite
it in your own words. The words you choose, the
style you use, will be in your unique voice.
Edit
judiciously. Many people start to write with strong, unique voices, then
make the mistake of editing the life out of their prose. Certainly
you will want to clean up misspellings, correct your grammar,
and erase ambiguity in your writing, but be careful not to remove all signs
of life from your words. If an incomplete sentence sounds best to
you, leave it in. If your character uses slang, don't correct their speech
unless they're impossible for the reader to understand. If beginning
a sentence with and sounds right to you, don't change it because of a critique
partner's objections or to correspond with a writing rule you read
somewhere. When the time comes and your editor suggests you change things,
then you can reconsider. For now, you have the final say in your words.
Your decisions reflect your unique voice ‑‑ the one editors
are looking for.